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[绿意盎然] 【好色老翁淫我妻】

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不好看。内容很一般。用春药这个剧情走的不好。
老翁VS少妇,一开始用春药,然后就这样胁迫XX,有点无聊。
一开始就说夫妻两性生活不充实,那就可以再女方描述一些。比如女主自慰或者暴露来满足自己。
然后被老头们看到用女主自己做的事来胁迫,这样在情节上也比较有趣吧。女主的挣扎也会更多。而且老头子性事方面应该不会太持久。往往心有余而力不足,那么心态上就会有点BT,所以除了H外,更多的可以描述怎么玩弄女主,胁迫女主做些各类XO的事。
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  • tim118 金币 +8 回复认真,奖励! 2010-8-4 02:28

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